Hello, Readers!
Today I will be telling you guys about a schooner boat and from my prescription, I say it looks like a pirate boat from 1942, and if I was on top of this boat I could probably see the whole sea and the sunset, maybe even dolphins.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello, Readers!
Today I will be telling you guys about a schooner boat and from my prescription, I say it looks like a pirate boat from 1942, and if I was on top of this boat I could probably see the whole sea and the sunset, maybe even dolphins.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Hamid
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your ideas about the Schooner boat, it does kind of look like a pirate boat! Next time, see if you can get a few more sentences into your paragraph.
- Miss Birtch